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  • May. 12th, 2008 at 11:58 AM
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My two favorite non-writing activities related to writing are research and building playlists of music.

The current project -- a decidedly time-limited distraction from the novel -- requires an enormous amount of research, a lot of which is difficult. Good difficult. I know I'm getting close to where I need to be because of the dreams I had last night. Saturation dreams, the kind I have when my brain is putting together all the pieces and making sense of a bunch of stuff. It's not totally different from learning a new game (especially a mmporg). It feels strangely like swimming. At the moment I can't touch bottom, but I know it's there now.

The even more fun part for this story was putting together the playlist. I habitually do this for short stories. I suspect it's actually more important for short-form stuff than it is for longer works because short stories live or die by their hold on mood and music is an extremely effective way for me to get into the feel of the time and place. The times and places of this story are extremely particular.

Sometimes my playlists are heavy on music with lyrics. This playlist is largely instrumental, or with chanting. I even fit in a couple of Wimme's solo yoik pieces.

I'm being coy about the story itself because it's for the Haunted Legends anthology and... well, I feel like being coy about what I'm doing. If [info]nihilistic_kid or [info]ellen_datlow want to know what I'm working on before I send it, I'll be glad to tell them. I'm guessing not, though.

Also, I'm at that phase of story ideation here I get superstitious about saying what I intend to do, lest I pin down things that should be mobile.

This and that

  • Apr. 30th, 2008 at 11:28 AM
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First up, GUD Magazine is teasing people with the cover art I did for them. It's been a very long time since I'd done a cover for anyone, and I had a blast doing this one. There were no guarantees they'd buy what I did, but the premise of the cover was just too cool to pass up trying, and then they loved it. They're good folks. Go check them out!

I've just finished chapter 4 on my novel. I'd gotten a bit bogged down in research on drug culture, since I want my character to have just exactly the right kind of OD experience, but I've sorted that out now. (If anyone knows how much any street drugs cost in Kansas City circa 1985, please speak up!)

With chapter 4 done, I'm pausing the novel long enough to dig through my obscene backlog of unpolished fiction. It's damn well time to get stuff out there. I've got six nine stories that I could be circulating that I'm not because I haven't revised them.

Once that's done I'm strongly considering a piece for Haunted Legends. To which I'd also just like to say a huge thanks to both [info]ellen_datlow and [info]nihilistic_kid for having an open submission period.

When I do my research late.

  • Apr. 19th, 2008 at 11:57 PM
Leandro, New, Evil, Eye, Spooky eye, Writing, Hazy, Uvula, Gray
I finished writing Chapter 3 today, and started Chapter 4.

In preparing to write a description at the beginning of 4, I did a bit of research I really should have done before chapter 1 and neglected to do because I thought I could trust my memory.

Hah hah. WRONG!

At the beginning of the book, it's June 1985. My main character runs a Commodore 64 BBS and has a huge collection of demos and games -- in fact, he's got a hard drive, which was a hugely exotic item at the time. Due to plot things, his collection of demos becomes important and he trades a bunch of them with another character.

The problem is that there was no established demo scene in 1985. The first few appeared that year, morphing out of the crack intro, but there wasn't any sort of established scene until later in '86.

For a variety of reasons I can't easily just move the narrative forward a year or two (there's a bunch of plot stuff depending on very specific and time-limited tech). It's note a huge problem -- I've already solved it, in fact. I'll just make the focus in that part of the book be entirely on cracked games.

It's a problem that got me thinking of prevention, though. So I went out and got a copy of The Puzzle Palace by James Bamford, and I'm going to order up a couple more books from Amazon. I don't want to get caught similarly ill-informed when it comes time to write the government agency parts of the story.

Between phreakers, crackers, carders, a registered nurse and the FBI, CIA, NSA and NRO I am going to be utterly swamped in jargon. It's going to be interesting balancing it all so it's comprehensible to readers. Not everyone liked the new Miami Vice movie, and a commonly cited reason was that it made pretty much zero concessions to explaining things to the audience.

Some very different research notes today.

  • Apr. 17th, 2008 at 10:36 PM
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By the time I was done taking notes I'd developed a formula for the rate at which humans use volumes of time (measured in liters).

This pleases me.

Packrats: I need your l33t sk1llz!

  • Apr. 12th, 2008 at 1:55 PM
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Do you box up everything because it might be useful some day? Have you been doing so since 1985? Are you a computer and/or gadget freak?

I need stuff from the 1985-87 era. What kind of stuff?

  • Sharper Image catalogs
  • Issues of Computer Shopper, Byte!, Compute, Computer Gaming World (or any other publication of that variety -- and yes, I'm aware there is a collector's market for some of that stuff; I don't want to collect -- see below)
  • Manuals for telephone equipment (consumer or otherwise)
  • Any ads for tech stuff from any magazines of the era

I don't need (or even want) actual physical copies. Scans are ideal and they only need to be good enough to be legible. If you can't scan them yourself, I'll happily pay for postage, scan them on my end and return whatever you sent me in the same condition you sent it (or pay you should something evil and postal happen in transit or while in my care). I don't even really need entire magazines. The ads are most useful to me, though reviews of hardware are great too, as well as speculative articles. I am completely aware that in asking for scans of ads and reviews from 1985 era Computer Shopper I am asking for A LOT. I'd be completely happy with a representative sample of just 10-15 pages, preferably covering several different areas of tech (pc, C64, Atari, printers, bulk floppy sales, etc).

Just to make matters easier, you can be enormously useful to me if you've got any of the stuff listed above just by leaving a comment here with some of the following information:

  • Prices of floppy disks, tractor feed paper, ink ribbons
  • Vendors for above
  • Location of users group meetings and what their focus is
  • Names of equipment manufacturers, what they make, how much it costs
  • Ads for things that sound stupid or impossible

Also, if I'm being completely dense and missing some available public source (or even quasi-public) for that stuff, I'd appreciate being told I'm a bonehead who doesn't know how to google. Providing you also include a pedantic example of how I should have done it.

If you don't have anything of this sort, but know people who might, please send them the link to this page.

All queries should be directed to the comments, where I'll happily arrange whatever variety of transport is required.

Hurrah for Erowid.

  • Apr. 10th, 2008 at 12:28 AM
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Today I wrote a character going to a party, getting some PCP and jumping into the great big swimming pool of radical depersonalization. It was extremely fun to write, but I enjoy taking my characters to places they don't intend to go. Though, to be fair, this character signed up for more or less what she got.

In other news, I've got an art project to finish now. I think if I'm to balance the two impulses, art must come after writing. Doing the pixel-pushing thing is no sweat after I've been writing for a while, but trying to write after using the visual part of my brain for a bit simply doesn't work. I not only forget how to type, but putting words into sentences gets to be an insurmountable difficulty.

But you know what? At the moment, I am loving my novel so much.

I hope I'm not liking my book so much it's making [info]gregvaneekhout angry at his.

I've been hanging out in this park watching the other kids play for long enough that I know there will come a day when I'm certain that the novel I'm working on is made entirely from raw sewage, so I'm just going to bask in the love I feel right now. Also, I am doing art things.

And so it begins

  • Apr. 6th, 2008 at 2:25 PM
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After a lot of floundering around and picayune 'preparation' where I did silly things like name my characters and find out what BBS software they were running, last night I wrote the first scene in the 8-Bit Cyberpunk novel. This book is going to be absurdly fun to write and startlingly, it's also funny. I didn't realize I could even do that.

Back home.

  • Mar. 31st, 2008 at 1:09 AM
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The Viable Paradise party at [info]drumiller's place was excellent!

I'll write more in detail tomorrow, and likely with pictures too. For now though I am headed to bed. Something about spending 8 hours in the car wears a guy down.

Some writing.

  • Mar. 24th, 2008 at 11:13 PM
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I finished a new story today, The Gardens of Lithia. A strange little thing, and short. 2400 words at the moment, or thereabouts. It's about a city that started out as a single block of stone that a woman gave birth to. For fun, I wrote it as a directed first-person narrative that heavily involves the 'listener'. There are effectively 3 different stories in it, at varying scales. [info]kirizal thought the city itself was impressively creepy, so I'm happy.

Hackedy hack hack

  • Mar. 15th, 2008 at 3:35 PM
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So <lj user="kirizal"> and I are out at Panera today to get lunch and write for a while.

I've been using the C64 Scene Database to download old C64 demos and cracks and games to get a better handle on the era of the story. It's been really fascinating to see that era through the lens of history and to be able to compress things or expand them as I choose. It's also been neat to  see a lot of the old demos I'd watched on a proper PAL C64 (emulator) so they work correctly, but that's another story completely.

At the moment though, I'm at Panera and I've discovered that there's a nanny filter on their free wi-fi and it considers the Scene Database to be pornography. Odd.

Mind you, a nanny filter hasn't stopped me even a little bit. I'm working on a story about hackers, can I really justify letting something so petty get in my way? Of course not. So I'm hacking into a database about hackers so I can gather research to write a story about hacking. Delicious!

Learning about the scale of industry.

  • Mar. 10th, 2008 at 9:06 PM
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As part of the research on one of my two current novel projects, this afternoon I sat down and tried to learn about what the petroleum industry will look like in 25 years. The short version is: big.

The biggest change is moving away from the extraction of 'light crude' -- oil that's in a relatively easily processable liquid state -- to extracting heavy crude.  Heavy crude is oil sand or tar sand. I've seen at least one petroleum executive describe it as 'shit', and indeed that's what it looks like.

This change is an extraordinarily important one. There are an awful lot of oil sands in Canada. Depending on how you want to look at it, the oil sands of Canada have been 'discovered' either since the Bering Straight migration or 1760-something. These aren't some kind of major new thing.

Now the important question is: if people have known about them forever, and the oil companies have been sticking hypodermics into every apocrine gland on this planet looking for tasty, tasty Earth-sweat why did all that stuff with the Middle East ever happen at all?

The answer is that oil sands cost all kinds of money and resources to extract useful oil from.

There's an excellent, brief writeup about it at Technology Review.

Behind the cut I've assembled a collection of images to illustrate the physical scale of the project.They're stolen from all over the place, so if you see an image here that's yours and you don't want it here, please contact me and I'll take it down.

Click here for scale! )

Notes from the front.

  • Mar. 8th, 2008 at 2:16 PM
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So the novel thing is barreling down the track with no regard to safety or braking.

It's quite clear that I've got a trilogy about hackers. So far though there are only two books. Categorically not a trilogy. So I've been periodically poking the idea to try and get a third novel. As it stands I've got an 8-bit Cyberpunk story and a Post-Petropunk story. I've kicked around a lot of options, but only one of them had a cover image to go along with it. I mooted the idea of setting a story in Rhodes during the time of Hero and his automatons (when the main drag of town was supposedly lined with machines doing all manner of things).

Greekpunk, says I. [info]nihilistic_kid can be on the cover! Wearing a studded black-leather toga!

"You get to blog about that one, dear," says [info]kirizal.

However I don't think that's the third book unless [info]nihilistic_kid really, really wants to be on the cover.

Maybe for shits and giggles the third book will be a cyberpunk high fantasy novel.

-Warily eyes last entry-

  • Feb. 22nd, 2008 at 9:47 AM
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Well, that last entry is pretty impressively sloppy. I should probably not attempt to write book reviews at 1:30 am.

I'll leave it as is for shits and giggles.
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The History of Beard Bread.
by Zak Jarvis

One of the most remarkable foods in the world began in the middle of the fourteenth century when a merchant vessel set sail from Cascais in Portugal. They were headed for the spice markets of Morocco with grains and other goods when a storm blew them off course. The ship wrecked on an island 45 miles west of the rocky shores of Sagres.

The sailors certainly knew of the island. It was said to be the home of devils. Console Dos Diabos they called it in their logs. Others had named it Pedras Gritando, Ventos do Sangue or Árvores Sujas. It was not a popular destination. For reasons lost to history, that group of sailors settled the island despite the superstition surrounding it. They built a small fishing village and a church. The tradition of beard bread followed shortly after. The island is now called Pão do Medo and to this day their unique culture has survived almost unchanged.

The men of the island shave only once a month. Some go to the communal Barbeiro Grande, but most shave at home. No modern shaving products are used there, however. Each family has a set of straight razors that have been passed down through generations, some of which can be traced back to the famous blades of Damascus. Butter is used where others would apply shaving cream. The shaved beards are all brought to the town center, they're organized by hair color and given to the bakeries. Most bakers specialize in a single color but some make mixes. The hair is put into a vat with fermento do homem, a special yeast found only on the island. It's mixed with a bit of spelt, a pinch of salt and some spring water to make a fragrant slurry. Depending on the weather it can take between 45 minutes and 2 hours for the fermento to convert the hair slurry into a workable dough, then the bakers begin their work. The dough is shaped into crosses and wreaths and baked in stone ovens.

All the baked bread is taken to the church and a communal dinner is held after sunset. Most all beard bread smells the same, but each has unique characteristics. Red beard bread is considered to be the finest. It's crust is a beautiful dark copper color. It's taste is difficult to describe, being similar to soughdough but with a distinct steak-like flavor, imparted from the presence of iron. Brown beard bread is more rye-like in appearance and even somewhat in flavor, but its predominant taste is of slightly over steeped black tea. Blond beard bread is very mild in flavor, and similar in appearance to wheat bread. It lacks the bitterness that characterizes brown beard bread. Black beard bread has no real analogs. Its crust is richly black and glossy and its flavor is overwhelmingly bitter. As with any food that comes in such variety, each style has its adherents.

The bread is possible only because of the unique yeast, Aspergillus barbicans. The yeasts used to make regular breads (and many alcoholic beverages) are fundamentally different. Saccharomyces cerevisiae digests the sugars in wheat and potatoes to make carbon dioxide. A. barbicans does the same with keratins, usually a completely indigestible organic compound.

Why does Pão do Medo play host to such an unusual mold? One answer is that is a graveyard for green sea turtles. In late senescence the turtles swim north from African waters and strand themselves on Pão do Medo. Their shells (like all turtles) are made almost entirely of beta-keratin and this in turn is digested by A. barbicans. Further study is needed to learn why the mold is unique to this island.

You might have guessed that beard bread could also be made from other substances. Indeed, though some claim to be able to distinguish between them, it is unlikely that there is any significant difference between beard hair and any other human hair. Nail clippings can be used, but the texture is said to be poor and the flavor musty, like very old pu-ehr tea. Claws can be used, but they must be pulped before they can be fermented and they supposedly taste much like fingernail bread. Some experimentation has been done with silks, but this is expensive. Cooks and bakers around the world are only now beginning to experiment with this unusual yeast. But the future is uncertain.

In 2006 the European Union began investigating a ban on beard bread citing sanitation concerns and fears that it could be a vector for prion diseases. Over the last hundred years the islanders have come to accept boiling the hair to rid it of lice or other pathogens. As long as butter is reintroduced most say the flavor is the same. So far there is no evidence of prion diseases being expressed in hair, though it isn't out of the question that some retroviruses could be transmitted. The World Health Organization has sponsored a research program to study the long-term effects of beard bread. Only time will tell if this traditional food will go the way of ortolan and casu marzu or if it will eventually be available in your local market.

That took more than I was expecting.

  • Jan. 13th, 2008 at 1:18 AM
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I just stuck the #end# on In the Valley of Steel Bones. I'd hoped to have finished it several days ago, but it was just really slow going. Fun, but slow.

I'm gonna sit on it tonight then give it a sanity edit tomorrow before sending it off to the writer's group.

Now I can begin working on the art for it.

Submissions opening for Viable Paradise XII

  • Dec. 31st, 2007 at 10:52 AM
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Starting January 1st -- tomorrow -- submissions open for Viable Paradise. I attended in 2006, [info]kirizal went in 2005 (I played was support spouse). As a writer, it was completely life-changing.

Personally, I attended because I wanted to feel like I was a writer instead of an artist with a hobby for words. I got that, and then some. The socializing was great, the lectures were incredibly useful and the access to professionals -- writers and editors both -- was worth more than I think it would be possible to pay. Being on Martha's Vineyard doesn't hurt.

In my case 5 days was enough to realign the molecular structure of my creative impulse. I've got a great deal more energy to spend on writing, and I've got vastly better tools to work on the raw material with.

If you're thinking about attending a writer's workshop of any sort, follow the link up there. It's the real deal.

Still around and stuff.

  • Dec. 19th, 2007 at 8:11 AM
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For whatever reason I've just been somewhat antisocial and feeling unlike posting LJ entries.

I've got a couple of things. First up, there's been a fire in Dick Cheney's office. Gee, I wonder if it destroyed the visit records that they've been ordered to turn over or if they've just got so much stuff to get rid of they're starting early?

Also, I've been alerted to Shimmer's next themed issue: Clockwork Jungle Book. I'm all over this one, folk. Until last night my idea for a story had been awfully vague and it wasn't really lighting a fire under my ass to write it. However, last night while driving home from the writer's group I managed to ask myself the question that got all the writing parts of my brain engaged.

The question: "what sort of automatons would the Cherokee Nation build?"

Keeping limber.

  • Dec. 6th, 2007 at 3:05 PM
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So on Tuesday my writer's group got together and did some more exercises from Le Guin's Steering the Craft. Apparently I took the book title to heart. This is a piece that has no punctuation whatsoever, and I had no idea what it was about until I'd finished it and yet it was about it -- quite clearly -- from the very beginning. Mostly I was toying with language and ways of forcing a setting using nothing but word choice. This has been edited slightly from what I wrote on Tuesday, mostly for fact-checking, and a bit for adding details that were too perfect.

 35° 53' 23 N and 23° 18' 28 E )

News from the front

  • Oct. 29th, 2007 at 12:46 AM
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We didn't have all the folks who were originally going to show up, and we didn't go to tidepools or fancy dinner, but dammit we had a VP Party.

We even made Scurvy Cure.

It was very, very good to see [info]mac_stone again and to meet [info]medievalist and to hang out with [info]gregvaneekhout and Shweta and Nathaniel. The latter two aren't Viable Paradise peoples, but they're associated in writer-craziness.

I feel so much more like a writer when I hang out with writers on a regular basis.

So much so that I've prepped up The Strongest Wind That Blows to send off into the world. It's really strange submitting fiction on paper.

Now we get our things packed up so we can go to World Fantasy Convention this week. With luck, upstate New York won't be hit by a freak blizzard.

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